Draft Workshop: Unit 3 Project Script

11/27/12

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1. Does the author’s introduction follow one of the templates for effective introductions we discussed in class (refer to your notes if you have to)? If not, suggest specific strategies (such as an anecdote mentioned later in the draft or some other detail) the author might use to craft a more effective introduction.

2. The assignment notes that the VoiceThread should contain a sustained analysis of the artwork’s formal qualities. In other words, the largest part of the draft should be devoted to analyzing the piece of art directly, rather than the contextual information the author connects it to. Does the draft meet this requirement? 

3. Evaluate the author’s thesis statement. Does it do all three things that we noted a strong thesis statement should do? 

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